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"Interlude 2: The Black Dog Page 2"
A Webcomic by Diego, Richard and Luke
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AVERAGE RATING: 5.00

Michael Corley (Guest), February 21st, 2013, 1:57 pm

Augh! Okay, THAT gave me something to fear!

TheStranger, February 21st, 2013, 5:53 pm

Great job setting the atmosphere in the first scene. Tee-Hee.

Oarboar (Guest), February 21st, 2013, 11:49 pm

This is a great panel -- sets up a little background and establishes the evil baddie as definitely an evil baddie.

Now it's time for me to put my ex-editor green-shaded visor on and point out that the word you're looking for is "elicit." "Illicit" is what the bad guy is up to, no doubt. Also, in the next bubble, shouldn't it be "who he is talking to" instead of "who is talking to?"

Of course, the nice thing about the intertubes is that you can come in and edit this and make my comment disappear. We have never misspelled "Esataisa!"

Anyhow, great strip, and I also enjoy reading your blog as well.

RDPulfer, February 22nd, 2013, 8:49 am

Thanks for pointing that out, Oarboar! I need to work harder in eliminate spelling and grammar errors on this comic. I appreciate you telling us about it - thanks for reading!

Rest assured, we won't delete your comment just because it makes us look silly (we do that pretty well on our own). Thanks again!

RDPulfer, February 27th, 2013, 3:16 pm

Late Page 3 Page 3 is in fact on the way. Luke's on his honeymoon, so we're running a little behind. The update should come sometime this evening.

Oarboar (Guest), February 27th, 2013, 6:19 pm

That's cool. First things first! BTW, I just hit a major decade-marking birthday myself, and one of the items I drew up on the bucket list to commemorate it is to a) actually learn how to draw and then b) do my own webcomic. And I fully expect to be hoist on my own petard.

RDPulfer, March 6th, 2013, 8:22 am

Sorry I didn't get a chance to reply, Oarboar - things have been a bit hectic. But happy belated birthday nonetheless, and I wish you the best of luck on your webcomic! You'll keep us updated, right?